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EDIT: LMAO dude its called the Marshal Islands not marsh islands LOL

Please excuse the lame title LMAO (title means the beachs of marshal islands)
this is a commisions for :iconverlidaine: of her character Cunegonde, I FUCKEN LOVE THIS PIC by far its my best from what i think. I seriously love the stained glass wings how they came out and i adore the look of the water i worked really hard on this and i put some fur detail into the character. well verlidaine wanted a scene from the marsh islands and well some what attempt. anyways i hope u love his as much as i do and ur ultimate ref of sunray is on its way as well hun.

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Cunegonde (c) =Verlidaine

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:iconjskra:
Also, I saw quickly your gallery and I have to admit, like most people here. It's your best piece I saw so far.

I like the pose of Cunegonde. The wings are looking very good, you did an awesome job on them.

But, you could do more details of wings, they're looking little plastic.

Good you didn't forget the water reflection mirror of the =Verlidaine's character.

However, the water is little too soft, and what goes with it, little strange.
The water around Verlidaine, this sparkling one, is too blury and plastc, too dark, you could do more detail there.
And the water in the distance, around the trees, is too bright, when you look on the dark water there.

As for the trees, you could use there some orange/yellow. Trees aren't only pure green. But nice, that you shaded them, too.

As for the sky, I like that actually.
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:iconlupehero38:
Wow, this is amazing. O___O The colors are so pretty. <3
I really love the stained glass wings and the pose. The fur detail is nice as well, and the background is just plain awesome! *o*
Wonderful job! :+favlove:

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omg..amberlina!! this is so amazing! the colours the anatomy, everything!!! awesome job sis :D

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Oh man, this is definitely one of your best pics :D The water looks AMAZING!

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....so awesome...O.O

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I love the fur, it's so beautiful! :D

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O_O wow that is so freakin awesome!! i dont think i CAN cridize!....O_O

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oo hello person....I feel lyk doin somethin...GLOMP:glomp:
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I love the wings, they are my favorite part. The color, the shading, the high lights! Water looks great too!

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aw so pretty! your art is so detailed

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I wish I could critique.. but I have nothing to critique!

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oohhh wow.. this is super amazing!!!
¡muy bueno, su tan realista! :heart:
(i hope that was right..not so good at spanish any more :( )

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